Poem -
"sIn"vented creations
Hard wired
DNA tired
genetics invented
man created life
overcoming
sickness
politics threatened
rocking right to left'em
BEHIND
time
lightyears
AHEAD
of light
Dark-ages
pages
written
on human flesh
with sacrificial blood
lost ones
forever gone
RETURN
back home
before the
INVENTIONS
that started
HELL ON
EARTH
simple
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Wow Rob for me this reads like a purge, splurged out with no sugarcoating. I loved the feeling of decent as it plunged the reader into the reality of hell being earth. Great writing x
You and Pratibha both understood it so perfectly , thanks Gwen as always for your support and stellar feedback -Rob
Love what you done here Rob. We as humans have everything we need in our DNA to live but modern times come along and to say hell is on earth is becoming a sick reality that man is evermore creating. Pxxx
Yes we do, im glad you interpreted it the way i intended it to read . Im glad you enjoyed and thanks for the read and feedback :)