Poem -
"Slow down please"
Jill's challenge
Like 4 Pin it 2"Slow down please",
Take the time to listen,
take in the colours and the sounds."Slow down please",
Take the time to dance,
Romance,
Allow nature to astound."Slow down please",
Stop wishing your life away,
No job is ever perfect, nor worth it,
Live now, for today!"Slow down please",
Hold on to your dreams, within you haveΒ the powers,
Take the time to reach for them, stop and smell the flowers.
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Comments
Way out of my comfort zone lol please be kindΒ
Briliant Simon & pinned β€οΈ?β€οΈ
Thanks Jill that was a tough one lolΒ
Its very good β€οΈ?β€οΈ
Thanks Jill means alot ?
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Terry Reeves and Curious Onlooker will be part of the challenges now so please take the time to check out their works as well. A lovely pin-worthy write my friend!
I will Lisa, will be fun.Β Just have to keep each other posted, work out who's turn it is and good luck to everyone ??
Hi Simon,
Loved your poemβfull of optimism!Β Pinned!Β
Lauren?
Thank you Lauren. This is out of my comfort zone so I appreciate the feedback.Β There's a few of us challenging each other to random writes if you're interested? Your ink is stellar and it's alot if fun and whoever sets whatever challenge, it's fun to write.Β Examples of last challenges are Macbeth, the sea, rainbow and the latest one is slow down please ?
It's good - no comfort zone worries!
Thank you Terry.?
Penned beautifully!Β
Favorite lines:Β
The last stanza is inspiring.Β
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Wow thank you, never expected such a response ?
Your versatility shines through! Fantastic my friend!
Your versatility shines through! Fantastic my friend!
Thank you Ian, just shows you the power of these challenges lol.