Something Changed
Reflecting waters. Mirror image.
Everyoneās living in their glory days.
Hidden visuals and premonitions.
I think I want to fix the world's mistakes.
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Run, away.
I donāt want to feel so afraid.
Walk, away.
For the pleasures, for me, donāt feel the same.
Breath, and pray.
I donāt need the crowd to hold my weight.
I want to help other`s just escape.
I want to live in the world that I create.
Tired of feel-ing, tired of being forced on how to think.
Tired of dream-ing, the goals that others all want to seek.
I want to know why; I didnāt even try to find the light.
I want to hold on tight; to the life I was given in all good time.
I donāt want to be alone. Because no one wants to feel so cold.
But I donāt want to try to hold. Onto you, if you're never home.
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Reflecting waters. Reflecting waves.
Trees in the ocean.
And in the eye.
Of a hurricane.
Lump in my throat when I was writing this. But emotions nonetheless. I hope you enjoyed~
I highly recommend listening to the song, it inspired the verse and muse behind the write~
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Ah lovely write Max. Like a 'lightbulb moment' when realisation sets in that sometimes it's easier to let go of whatever it is we find so troubling x
Ahh thanks, Marion, yes, this poem really was a lightbulb moment. I had plans to post a different one this morning. But this write felt more emotional. I`m really glad you enjoyed it, my kind friend~ I hope you have been well. Sincerely, Max
A very raw, reflectiveĀ and thought-provoking write!Ā Your deepĀ emotion isĀ evident in this piece! Well-done!
Thank you, Linda! Most of my work is straight from the mind and the heart~ It means so much that you stopped by to comment on my work. Really, it lifts me up in my day. Thank you once again, Max~
š„° My pleasure!
A lump in the throat is better than other places, but hard when gasping none the less.
Thank you for being brave enough to write about your own pain.Ā
refreshing and raw is the new black.Ā
Hi Liliana. I totally agree. It's also always better up in the air, am I right? I feel honoured that you decided to comment. What I said is true, you inspire and motivate me whenever I write. Sincerely, your friend Max~
There ya go ............. see .. Now don't tell me I didn't tell you .. Quite the masterpiece sir and the perfect marriage between poetry & image celebrated, if you don't mind me saying so .................... Okay, the music clip may not have been my cuppa tea, but then, you can't win em all, can ya :)
Ahhh thanks Neville. It's true. As Marion said sometimes it's the light bulb moments. Sometimes they are buried deeper than most. Doesn't mean we should give up on em. Really thank you for supporting me through thick and thin Neville. I know my music is questionable at the best of times XD, but it means so much that you chose to listen anyway. I'm glad I could share my poem with you~ sincerely, your friend MaxĀ
My pleasure Max :)
Hi Max,
Good thought provoking piece
but then you have what it takes.
Love,
Terry.
xoxo :)
Thanks so much, Terry! Glad you enjoyed this one, my friend. I`m chuffed that you think so~
Hi, Max, sorry I haven't been on for some time, work's been hell due to two of my same level collegues were on holiday at the same time and me having to do their emergencies too... Anyway, we're back at enjoying this piece, an honest though sad oneš reminds me of myself 35 years ago (just before meeting my wife). I will probably sleep tonight, but the tendency is to eorry about you now. Hope it is an experiment in feeling low and not the truthš¤š keep writing
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Hi John, thanks for your kind comment, but no stress~ Life is alright right now, I know heaps of people have it a lot worse than me. But your support is really appreciated!! I hope you are well mate, please there are so many more things to worry about besides me. Sincerely, your friend Max
cool write Max!...................................................................................Jim
Thanks Jim! Glad you enjoyed it~
Rightyo, mate, I won't worry nomoreĀ š¤£š