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Sorrow and Grief

Sorrow and Grief

Grief,
It's a feeling,
A feeling of emptiness and the loss of a whole,
A conserved feeling of hurt and loneliness,
It feeds off of long life memories and trauma,
Many people deal with grief,
Some people carry it around,
But others express it as a harmful habit,
Others may express it as the loss of a loved one,
It comes in many ways and different forms,
It's a feeling,
Grief,
Such a heavy word, 
But a feeling of relief, 
Due to the peace of the loss, 
Never again to be seen,
But the heart, 
Knowing that they'll always be there,
By my knowledge and experience, 
Let go, 
Let go of that hurt, 
Let go of that burden, 
Let it be known to your inner being that they are always there, 
Be the light they'd always want you to be, 
That feeling, 
Grief,
It's such a complex word.
 

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Tony Taylor

Hello EMILY, I really like the way you described grief here......with poetic advice to your readers woven into it as well.....bidding them "Let go of that hurt" is perfect......but to do it with some of the well conceived phrasing you have delivered makes it all the more powerful....My favorite line is ~

                             ~ Grief, such a heavy word
                                But a feeling of relief..."

Wow!!.....excellent debut dear poet sister.......ALL STARS!!.......well done!!.....and......WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  : )

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