Soulful Bliss
Dedicated to our loved ones that are no longer in this world
I know nothing I say can stop the pain and sorrow
I know nothing I say can stop your hurt and crying
I know nothing I say can take away that feeling
But know this....
That light inside
That transcendental energy
The spirit soul
Is FREE
Unattached
Liberated
Not bound to any material bondage
Not bound to any pain or sorrow
Not bound to birth, disease, old age or death
It is set FREE
To wonder
To go beyond the material world
To go outside this realm
To go where it longs to be
With the ultimate divine power
The supreme being
In true soulful bliss
Spiritually
Eternally
Endlessly
© Pratibha Savani 27/01/2021
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Thank you Hj for reading and like! Px
wonderful poem
i like how you did your
poem and and its
different and how
formatted i never
thought abut doing
that way it must be fun
Hi Greg. Thank you. I do like to play with words! And it's the artist in me that likes to do things different where I can :). Thanks for reading like and pin! My uncle passed away recently and I just recited this poem in evening via zoom goes our evening prayer programme. Px
I am sorry about your uncle
I will say a prayer for you and your uncle I’m very sorry I hope that he didn’t die of Covid I will always say a prayer
Thanks Greg. My uncle lived his life. He didnt die of covid. He was in his 80s, lived his life and will always remember him as the calm soul that he was 🙏🏽 Px
Well I will say a prayer For you and him
🙏🏽 much appreciative for your kind compassion Greg x
Pratibha, where did this amazing poem come from? Gorgeous! It like the words fell from the sky. A well crafted piece x
love this
Sarfraz
Hi Sarf. Thank you! I love your comment - words fell from the sky!! It came to me in the very early hours of the morning so I wrote it down and then edited tiny bits in morning. I really like this one. Thanks for the amazing comment friend!
I just recited this poem this evening via zoom during the evening prayers programme for my uncle that passed away that I had mentioned, he was in his 80s and lived a full life and the poem went down well with my family :) Px
Brilliant TRUTH!!....Honestly and forthrightly conveyed......I LOVE the formatting and (as you know) I completely agree with every, single, word......The nature of energy is to change.....it is the only thing in this reality that is immortal.....and we are ALL made of energy!!.......ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!.....GREAT work dear poet sister!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo : )
Thank you Tony! I am glad you got to read this one about my take on the afterlife. Its definitely your thing.
I have had many cokment on my layout. This has now become my style....as I love playing with words and layout. Thank you for the pin and liking this piece.
My uncle passed away recently, he was in his 80s and lived a full life and I just recited this poem to my family via zoom this evening as part of our evening prayer programme and it went down well. It's done its purpose today. Px
Thank you Jim for reading! Px
This is heartfelt and will be held comfortably in the hearts of all who have lost some one dear to them. A beautiful, beautiful poem. I am so glad I took the time to pop by your page this morning x
Thank you Tina for reading and the pin. Really appreciate the comments and so pleased you found it beautiful.
I recited this poem via zoom to my family last week in honour of my uncle passing away.
Px
Pratibha I'm so glad I found this and to read your uplifting poem filled with that great virtue called hope. A great and so heartfelt beautifully written poem.
I love the way you have constructed it too, for it feels as if any lucky reader is taken on a journey, a spiritual journey slowly and gently, all so softly twisting and turning upwards to a better brighter place.
Five stars and pinned for another worthy reread and thank you for writing and sharing.
Stay safe and I wish you well.
Hi Shaun. Thank you for those lovely comments and another fabulous pin! I love your analysis of it. This is my second spiritual write but this time I have been a little creative with layout too. Funny u shiuld mention the word journey - my first spiritual write is posted here called - the ultimate destination: journey of the soul!
I love playing around with words. It's so much fun.
I really wanted those words in bold to stand out so that's why I did it that way. Plus I have never been one to write in my sketchbook all on the left hand side so why should I digitally?!! So that's why I did it that way.
There is usually a reason for my poetic madness!!
I look fwd to reading your other poems. Stay safe and have a great day. Px💜
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Thank you Marion 💜💜💜
Beautiful wording, I loved the sense of drifting I got as I read this. And that’s all down to the clever structure of the piece ⭐️ As Einstein said “we are all made of energy, and energy cannot die” this is a powerful poem which reminds us of what we are made of. Saved and pinned ✨👏🌻📌
Hello Gwen and thank you for those fab comments and amazing pin! This is my second spiritual write and I think I got better at it this time. Spirituality is one of my inspirations when writing they come hand in hand with philosophy and I love them both. It's kind of become my signature style of structure and writing now. I like playing with layout. I'm an artist first!!
And I love science..another fab inspiration of mine so the quote was just perfect in your comments!! Thank you Gwen 💜💜💜