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Special Delivery

Special Delivery

Post early for Christmas, the slogans advise,
to make sure  your gifts will arrive.
I’m not sure of the postage way up in the skies,
for the one gift I want to survive

This parcel is filled with the tenderest care
and is sealed with a most gentle kiss.
It’s winging it’s way to my loved one up there
and the message attached will say this

‘I miss you so much and at this time of year
When festivities are so profound
I know you’ll be smiling, I wish you were here
and I wasn’t so sadly earthbound.

But memories are treasures that live ever more
And remind us of all that we share
The laughter and tears that went all before
remembering when you were there

So although you are gone, I want you to know
that I carry you deep in my heart.
Merry Christmas, I love you, and still miss you so,
you’re inside me, we’re never apart.’

 

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Tony Taylor

My goodness this is Beautiful!!.....the softness that carries the overall tone of this piece is excellent....and made that way by some VERY well crafted phrasing that creates lovely imagery for the minds eye to feast upon ~

                           ~ "But memories are treasures
                                That live ever more..."

I LOVE that line.....it's profound in so many ways......and there are many such shining tidbits running throughout the entirety of this piece of stunning poetic Melancholy!!....and although the sadness is there...it's the Love that shines the brightest here!!.......ALL STARS & PINNED!!......truly magical write my friend!!......BRAVO!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo  : )
                  

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lodigiana

Christmastide is a difficult time..we love to make it joyous for the kids but we never quite forget those we have loved and lost..and long to keep them particularly close to us at this time of year..You use the world melancholy and that is the precise emotion that I hoped would  dominate this piece and I am so happy you picked up on it my sensitive and gentle friend..Thank you so much. Lodigiana x

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Marion

Just beautiful my friend 💕

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lodigiana

Thank you so very much Marion..that means the world to me. Lodigiana x

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Yiyan Han

Oh dear Lady Friend lodigiana! You must be in joyous tears when composing this very tear jerking piece at this time of the year!

Love was when you loved dearly to each other
Never fading with the sunset
Think your Love does smile from above

Warmest wishes!

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lodigiana

I just love your delightful reply..it really touched my heart..Thank you so much my dear friend. Lodigiana x

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The fish of the sea

Not much to say, just a beautiful and unique write. Speechless I say! Peace to you. TFOTS 

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lodigiana

You are such a special commentator..I think you have a truly special soul my friend and it makes me really happy that you enjoyed this piece..Thank you so very much/  Lodigiana x

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Yiyan Han

Come here again on the 22nd, and wish you have a good peaceful Christmas!

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