Poem -
Sphere
Gestures we offer one another,
Like flagrant temptation, one holds to the next
But the blunt of our appologies and words to one another
tend to follow a familiar pattern
Circling itself once again.
Sparking memories of an older apology~
One without flavour or stability
But rather fluid and inconcrete.Β
I refuse to be one of those,
For I would rather be resented for being selfish
Than hand over an empty platter of someone else's regret.Β
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***** GREAT WRITE
Thank you!
Hey EMILY!!...... this is a truly powerful piece...... fantastic phrasing driving home the intent of the Title!!.....".. circling itself once again.."... the round and round of those words without the heart of depth and meaning ~ or empty apologies........ great sense of metering here as well........ and those two closing lines are killer!!........ALL STARS....... well done!!....... and......WELCOME to COSMO!!.........LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo
Thank you thank you! Very much appreciated!
Welcome to Cosmo, hope to read more from you soon.
Wow! Emily, I found you on shuffle. I`m very impressed by this write, intrinsically complex. Such a thought-provoking poem. Yes, I think I`m gonna pin this for a later read. Seems like a poem that keeps on giving!