Spiritual Harmony
Beguiling
Benevolent wonder
Unearth this languished soul
In dreams where we can slumber
And paint our hearts as whole
Your eyes spill pools of timeless jewels
The fountain of devotion
Intrinsic mellow light infused
A transcendental ocean
Where you and I capsize within the confines of this grace
To blend our lovers light and trim
The distance, time and space
Eternal is the force which drives
Pure transmundane thinking
Where true love births and multiplies
Souls bound for interlinking
Their sumptuous thoughts
Inflame a bond
Etched
Sketched
Through layers of time
A sense of home
Two hearts are sewn
Into the great divine
To know deep down
With love
What’s mine is yours
And yours in mine
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Thank you so much Greg and for the pin x
your so welcomed
Beautifully penned my poetic lovely friend ❤️💕❤️
Thank you ever so much lovely ❤️🌹 and for the pin too xx
U r so welcome luv 🌹🌹🌹
Oh just stunning Gwen...you manage to convey such feeling in all your writes!! Great love shines out in this Gwen and also a great understanding of unknowable things...have to go out will catch up later...pinned 🧡💜 🧡
Wow thanks my lovey friend, your words are always so encouraging to me ❤️ Lots of love and hugs to you and thanks for the pin xx 🌹💗
“Eternal is the force which drives
Pure transmundane thinking
Where true love births and multiplies
Souls bound for interlinking ”
Beautifully written poem , the stanza above particularly spoke volumes to me . I have a ton of catching up to do on here , I’ve been kind of selfish going through a phase but I’m out of my shell again .
xo Rob
Hello Rob :) I always love your feedback. I totally understand the need to retreat into your shell. It happens to all of us. I am glad you feel more your perky self :)
Thank your for sharing your wonderful thoughts on this write. When you do give feedback it is always so substantial and supportive. Happy writing and reading my friend :) x
A real poem of infused emotions here. Seems like such a blend between pure energy of the world and as you point out, time and space. As well as being so passionately intimate. I have no clue how you guys do it sometimes. XD, but it's absolutely fantastic when you do. I`ll be checking back on the Collab space too. Sorry, I have been so very busy this last week... Hope to catch up soon! Your friend Max
What an insightful comment Max :) yes it is talking of the energies fusing, “what’s mine is yours and yours is mine” is speaking of unity of energies. A wholeness forming. You are very perceptive in your readings my friend. Which always makes for an interesting read, when you leave feedback. Thanks for being your fabulous self here on Cosmo. Never need to apologise for being busy. I will check the collab today at some point
All the best
your friend Gwen :)
My Goodness GWEN!........you have an exceptional gift for wielding words ~
~ "Their sumptuous thoughts
Inflame a bond
Etched
Sketched
Through layers of time
A sense of home
Two hearts are sewn
Into the great divine..."
Absolutely PERFECT!! Everyone has remarked at the exceptional quality of this write......so, I will simply say BRAVO!!.......PINNED for perfection!!......wow!.......your bloom is an AMAZING thing to watch!!......well done.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Gosh thank you Tony :) for your attentive feedback on this poem. For enjoying my rhyming and always giving me such words of encouragement. Truly I am forever grateful of your kind support with my writing
Many many thanks
your good friend Gwen :) x
Woww such an awesome romantic poem, i was admiring many lines, esp, ' capsize, and transmundane, sketched etched rhyming pair. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Thank you ever so much for looking back on the poems on Cosmo, and reading my poem. For your kind words and insight and the encouragement
Gwen :)
Epic words of love and light...I love the spirtual essence. Great imagery.
Many thanks for reading and your lovely feedback :) so glad you enjoyed
Gwen Gwen Gwen the comments have said it all! Beautiful piece, your lines are amazing...like the ones Tony pointed out. I loved it all. Pinned! Px
Thanks ever so much P :) chuffed you liked this one x ❤️
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Superbly scribed and with such a timeless quality throughout .. if there was a word I knew that could more adequately describe the very essence of spirituality .. then I would enter it in the space between the hug I have purposefully left vacant ( .................................................. ) Neville :) x
Awe Neville truly couldn't as for a better response, and thank you for looking back on my writing. So very grateful my friend x
What more can one say that hasn't been said already and can only to the chorus, the words thank you.
Thank you Gwen for writing and sharing your poem of love and the energy it beautifully bestows in its beguiling lines and imagery.
And you use the words " A sense of home" which speaks volumes and elevates a reader to that special place where endless love resides.
Thank you Gwen for sharing and taking me there and my feet haven't touched the ground. x.
Awe Shaun, I am finding your breadcrumbs of wonderful words a delight to discover today my friend. These words are truly beautiful and thoughtful. Thank you ever so much a thousand times and more. It means the world that you took time to read back on my work. I am so sorry I never got a notification
Always so very thankful to read your insightful commentary and your own poetry that is flawless every time
All the very best my friend
Gwen x