Poem -
Spiritual Mind
...............................a second witness............................................................
Experienced an epiphany one day!
After learning about the Gospel plan.
Our spirits come from the longest way!
The spirit and body is the soul of man.
Everyone has their own personal belief,
Think about possibilities and the means!
Don't want to be causing stressful grief,
Having two minds, what are your dreams?
Your spiritual mind would see the light,
The mortal mind would allow a view.
One would warn of a coming plight!
The other mind might be deja vu!
One would warn of a coming plight!
The other mind might be deja vu!
Â
Support CosmoFunnel.com
You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.
Comments
thank you Greg!
Thank you bunches Marion!
Oh that is so brilliantly clever Jim!Â
Your last two lines repeated to enhance and reinforce the deja vu effect and not to lose sight of your poems wonderfully written message.
A great write with superb rhyme and captivating to read.
Thanks for writing and sharing Jim five worthy stars and pinned for another deserved reread.
Â
Appreciate the feedback and support Shaun! very happy you liked it!...Jim
VERY poetic JIM!!.....Truly insightful......and compelling to the point of inspiration!!.......ALL STARS!!.....LOVE your style dear poet brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
Your evaluations are very helpful Tony my brother! Thank You!..............Jim
Thank you Hj! Always!
Whos a clever lad eh Jim is & Jill pinned to reread ❤️💙❤️
Jill is "gentle on my mind" Thank You!
💕💙💕
Hi Jim,
I enjoyed the read.
Just a point - some may say that God
gives us 'disaster' tests but no matter
how many tests we are given,Â
we will continue to make the same mistakes.
Regards,
Terry.
xo
Hi terry, I believe deity gives us agency and we bring the disasters on ourselves, and then stands ready always to help if we remember to ask. I believe life is a test in itself especially if we leave Him out. People want to blame deity for being born and any problems that arise on Him. We many times don't want to grow, progress or experiment with the Gospel we just want things handed to us like little children. I believe the HG will warn us if we will make the effort to be worthy..thanks for your comment!.................Jim
The spirit has a long term view of our lives..
IT is eternal and is full of the goodness and right thinking of God
Our flesh is purely ego and desires. This produces suffering. I am learning
that no matter what spiritual teaching one pursues or attempts... It is aboutÂ
putting away the ego and hearing the spirit.. allowing it to lead us to a better way and to our spiritual home.
Namaste
Laraine... I liked the poem very much
I am so pleased you liked it! I wrote one called "Communication you might like as well. This poem answers the second witness. Thank you for reading! .........Jim
I was in the neighbourhood Jim and came back for a reread.
I really enjoy reading your poem Jim.
And I thank you again for sharing and for writing a touch of poetry class.
Thanks for your support Shaun, pleased you liked it!................Jim
Thank You bunches sparrowsong!
Thanks for the read and pin Greg!
You delight your readers with every sentence Jim x
wow I hope you're right ! that would bring me great joy! thank you Being Me!
I want to clarify my belief, I believe we are an eternal spirit given a body for a mortal experience.A different entity; The Holy Spirit being a personage of only spirit, is part of the God Head, one with the Father and Son in purpose, and can influence all the receptive spirit children not deafened by the world noise! So saying we have two minds is that one is the mortal brain, the other being the mind of our spiritual self; able to receive influence from The Holy Spirit      .( two witnesses) ............................Jim
Thanks my friend Max, got one next week dedicated to you!
hugs Marion!
Thank you Liliana!
thank you Shelley-Anne!