spring rain

Have you ever taken the time to watch rain?
Not dance in it
No
To watch
Its interesting because you'll realize
The rain isn't here for you
So stop
And watch what this stranger is here to do
A patter is its soft pattern
Rhythmless except the rhythm we give it
It doesn't need a drum anymore than a rustle does
Rain is free
the freedom earth gives it
But rain does little with its freedom
It drops quickly and directly
The wind does shake it some
But it will never correct it
The rain is angry I think
And lacking hands or feet it strikes the only thing it can
Piledriving itself into the floor
I think the rain is full of hate
Probably due to being hated and ignored
Because It spends its childhood tossed through clouds with millions of others.
It must be hard to have no identity...
Maybe raindrops are the children of clouds committing suicide
It would make sense
Rain fills people with somber sadness
And I'm glad this is this way
because
I think it says we all love them
Those raindrops falling
And we are sad to see them go away
Little tombstones of grass push up in their wake
Although many drops lie in unmarked graves
Maybe we are raindrops
If you think of it this way
Tossed from the moment of birth into a screaming rapid world.
We cannot help but begin to fall
Some fall screaming
and others fall singing
but we are all headed towards the ground
And really all we can hope is that a little tombstone of grass pushes up in our wakes
And that we did not direct ourselves to stone.

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Comments
This is very impressive to me :))
thank you
Im curious, what did you find impressive? love to know what you saw in it :)
There was something dark about it but so good ...I love the part about grass pushing through like tombstones and your correlation between screaming and singing raindrops...was beautiful to me...I guess I've never stopped and just paid attention to the rain as you have in your poem....
i like that you saw what i was saying
alot of my poems are observational. they start with realizing something and i try to sculpt it into a beautiful picture
Well kudos fellow poet you did an amazing job:)
Aaron...I love the comparative and the analogy in this write. I don't normally enjoy free-write poetry but this couldn't have worked as well in any other form. It is an outstanding write, gripped me within the first couple of lines and held my interest all the way through to the end. Very, very accomplished!
With respect
Sue Birch