Poem -
Squeak
Moon aglow on kaleidoscope hair
Tattered clothes in need of repair
Face-paint streaked in lamplight
Wafts of cotton-candy invite
Mousy squeak grating sounds,
Cloddhoppers plod fairgrounds
Fondling steely honed blade
Remorse mercilessly flayed
Femme silhouette onΒ a shade
Resentment for all pledges made
Rancor copious like;Β bulbous nose,
Calliope heart longed to expose.
A wicked smile on rouged lips
As a stiletto; like taffy slips
How ridiculously absurd
Jovial shoes last din heard
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Comments
Just brilliant!
Thank you kindly SimonΒ
wow!!!! please keep writing more, I cant get enough!!!!!
thank you Ella
Dark an enticing. Amazing stuff.
thank you Ian
Creepy and enticing, Lisa.
An interesting combination.
Well penned, I loved it!
~Dean
was there something I can do to improve it?? not trying to be picky but why only one star?
Oh, no! I must have hit the wrong one.
Forgive me for that, I'll see if I can correct it, ASAP!
no worries Dean, I've done it myself several times.
Whew!
Thanks for letting me know...
Thank you kindly Dean. Well Iβm so relieved
Me too!
I'm glad I was able to correct my mistake.
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You paint a dark picture beautifully, PD. Mysterious, flowing and wonderful all the way through.Β
Thank you kindly Michael