STANDING IN THE RAIN

Standing in the rain
watching the parade
going by when a oldÂ
man told me about
his life told me hisÂ
wife was gone it
wasn't long before
he sang song and then
he was gone
standing in the rain
waiting for a train
and watching allÂ
the people talk
about there pain
watching it washed
all down the drain
before we all go
sane
Standing in the rainÂ
on the edge of theÂ
woods waiting forÂ
bus no one made fuss
out of wood came girl
wearing hood she stood
there looking at us andÂ
ran back in the woods i
should have ran in after her
that would not be goodÂ
so i will just stand in the
rain
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People watching Greg, I do that also. Soak up the atmosphere and think about all the strange people that you've never seen before and will likely never see again. Good job you didn't go after girl from wood...lol. great write ?
Thank you Marion This is an old poem I just change the name of it and no I didn’t go after the girl in the woods I thought about going after but the way I am said it rhymed and I do like watching people go by where I sit for coffee every morning people walk by and I say hello they say hello backÂ
I notice my vote didn't take Greg...i just voted again ...cosmo.is terrible lately for not registering the votes!!
Yes it has been I don’t know why they need to do some upgrading in this site don’t you think but they won’t listen to me
They won't listen to me either...we will have to get Cherie on the case ??
I don’t think they’ll listen to anybody maybe will get Greg Tucker to tell themÂ
Yes!!!????
Hi Greg,Â
I liked the repeating line: "Standing in the rain"Â
You did a great job with incorporating rhyme into each stanza.Â
Favorite lines:Â
watching it washed
all down the drain
before we all go
sane
Thank you Katrina this is your old poem I just change the name of it is all original title is standing in the cold  change just a little bit to make Rhyme better I think it’s one of my better poems of late