Poem -

Star bathing

Star bathing

I'm star bathing
When your name pops up on my screen
Shorts and a tshirt
Soaking up the moonlight
Singing with the cicadas
Dancing with the crickets
Falling in love agin
With spring and me
I'm star bathing
When your name
pops up on my screen
The moons grey light
turns my skin to silver
The shadows urge me
to put it down
"move on."
The crickets sing
"We're having fun."
The cicadas beg
"Come fall in love."
The stars urge
"I miss you." You're voice says
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Tony Taylor

Hey SAVANNAH !!......VERY compelling imagery here setting the tone beautifully for the longing and lonely melancholy in the tone....... great use of the parenthetical here!!....,.ALL STARS!!.... well done dear poet sister!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo ???β˜€

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