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star people

star people

I've always wondered why stars are so stunning from afar
Even though they're just a bunch of planet like things that are burning hot
And then I just start comparing them to humans
So many people are beautiful to look at
But you can never know how they are as a person
People can be stunningly beautiful but also the meanest person you'll ever meet
The common thing about stars and people like that are
That you can only admire them from afar, because if you get too close to them
You'll get burned
Once you'll maybe get a slight burn but the closer you get to them the more they'll burn you
Till your body can't withstand these burns anymore and perish
Then you'll wonder how such a mesmerizing person can bear such ill intentions
In conclusion, let's just admire such people from afar since this is the best way
To protect yourself

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Being Me

Love what you've done here. The comparison is spot on. I've not thought about that before. Wonderful work. Pinned x

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The fish of the sea

Quality conversational poetry that I haven't seen in quite some time, Tina has said so perfectly about the context, but the muse is also SPOT ON. Luring me in is hard these days but I was hooked on every word. Man oh man, why did I lead with a fish joke. Anyway, welcome to the Cosmo! I hope you enjoy your stay. Also, 100% worth a follow. You earned it.

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