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STARDUST

STARDUST

                                        I am not a mere quantity of thoughts and desires
                                           Nor I am a mere amount of liquid and cells.
                                     In my dealings in the life I was given, I find meaning,
                                                           The meaning I place there!
                                      I glance to the light passing through my eyes
                                         Telling me how small and how brief I am here
                                                  And how I cannot understand it all.
                                   I, then, lift my head and set the sails of my own voyage,
                                        I push the waves, look for light and trust the winds.
                                                    

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Twilla Carpenter

Are we not all just clumps of vibrating atoms sticking near each other in the swerling chaos of improbability in the flaming torent of a massive explosion that we experience in slow motion as we indulge in our delusions of individuality? You are not small... child... you are the entire universe.

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Bernadete van d...

Hello Twilla, thank you for reading it and taking the time to send an
awesome comment. Beautifully said, you write well. 

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Neville

Delightful .. seriously very muchly enjoyed .. Neville 

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Shaun Cronick

Marvellous writing through out and thoroughly enjoyed where you take a reader.
A poem of light and so blooming good to read from start to finish Bernadete.
Thank you for sharing the journey.

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Pratibha Savani

Wow Bernadete! I absolutely love this journey unfolding into the cosmos!! Your titled already captured me and your lines captivated me!! I love anything to do with the universe and the metaphors in life sized up against space is tremendous. 
fantastic piece. Thanks for posting it.
Px

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Bernadete van d...

Thank you Pratibha. Just noticed I haven't replied to your generous comment.
Moments like this, really warm my heart and give me a great incentive to keep writing. We are in this journey together dear Poet. 
Live life, 
Carpe Diem!
Greetings, B
 

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