Poem -

Stars Not Working

prompt by al Bikaadi

Stars  Not  Working

Andromeda said that it was important to believe,
if you doubt my power, then I won't let you leave,
Alpha Centauri, my nearest star, beautiful you are, 
my mindset was adjusted now that I've come so far.
 
The Milky Way always had so much to say, about me,
said that unveil yourself from unnecessary mystery,
Three Sisters giggled when they saw the cross on my head,
they asked if I was beyond instruction in my Earthly bed.

The Great Bear growled from it's lofty constellation,
said that it was watching me with some consternation,
The Plough said remember us all and what we say,
we're older than you, respect our words, every day.

I am guided by the stars but must help myself,
in order to progress and live my life with good health.

 

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The fish of the sea

I saw the poetry challenge behind this one that Al Bikaadi set. And yep I reckon its given me some inspiration to try out my own! Really enjoyed it. A creative write my friends.

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Terry Reeves

Hi Max,
Thanks so much - join us!
Cheers 
Terry.
 

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