Poem -
State of reparation
Who appointed you God and holder of the keys to my private hell?
Where purgation and lustration must be endured.
I feel it beckoning, its abyss opening to welcome in the penitent...
Hades and the underworld could not prepare me for this,
this netherworld of pandemonium
Am I to be chastened or castigated to achieve the joy of your heaven?
Am I forever seeking redemption- but loathing every penance?
Or an abandoned soul no one can pray for?
To head straight to the light or miss the half night
Where angels truly fear to tread..
I am in an endless space ‘twixt right and wrongs,
where other creatures seek sacrifice….
To free them from this living death… my purgatory
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Hi Cherie.... thanks for your views...oh my goodness ... life certainly can be dark but we mostly keep the darkness under wraps...EXCEPT for poetry where all emotions are shared!..thank you yet again my friend!
Lodigiana x
Powerful dark write beautifully executed being of depth and intriguing design.
Competent committed work that can only engage the reader.
Well written !
Warmest wishes. x
Hi Richard, you have no idea how much I value everyone's comments but I am particularly humbled by your comments as I know the wonderful quality of your own writing ! Thank you so very much xx
Lodigiana
:) Hug. Thank you for sharing your creativity ! x
Brilliant write
Dear friend, sometimes the fewest words mean the most and yours certainly mean a lot to me! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment
Lodigiana x