Stay Real - Fish Edit
Farewell Hannah Jane
Overly nice?
Be real.
It`s never suffice
Hurt rather than heal.
Steal.
Hidden intentions and lies?
Maybe you’re trying - to give bad advice.
Maybe you’re pants - are now alight.
Maybe I can`t - fall asleep in the night.
You know,
It doesn’t wash with me
Genuinely frustrating
Hesitantly
Separating the facts late-ily
I only get involved
If I feel your resolve
Laugh and drink
I`m stupid to think
This is fake
I`m laughing
You’re a snake
I`m drowning
In my mistakes.
Surround me.
It's getting late…
The Fish of the Sea
With acknowledgement and the approval of the original Author. No Copywrite in place.
Like 5 Pin it 3From all the Cosmos, Farewell Hannah Jane (Hj) Thank you for all the stories and art that you have shared with us. You will be missed. Keep smiling.
Always. From Max and Jim
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I enjoyed thisun Max your very creative and love your choice of phrasing 💕❤️💕⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Awww thanks Jill! But please, applaud the previous poet, Hj has deleted her account. She was an inspiration to many of us here. Kudos~ Your friend Max
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Max, I didn't know Hj deleted her account, been out of the poetry loop for nearly two weeks.
Damn! Hj was superb and so bloody generous and could write like there was no tomorrow, poems to make you think, cry and laugh and such an original writer to boot.
Thanks for enlightening me, my friend and I wish you and Hj well in all her future endeavours
Thanks Shaun! Glad I could help, awesome to have you back on the Cosmos to!
And it's nice to be back Max.
Thanks man.