Poem - 13 May 2021, 14:14 Stone Heart Gwendoline Stone heart Petrified By grim truths Which killed its whimsy youth Crumbles Stumbles to beat A lifeless Nonsensical Weighted mass Whose only companion Is grief Like 6 Pin it 3 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 1520 Rating: Total votes: 5 Tags: Anguish Depression Grief Heartache Hopeless Poetry Genre: Freestyle Topic: Misery Listed in: Contest Entries 11 comments
Gwendoline13 May 2021, 14:28 Thanks ever so much MB, I am so grateful for your read and for leaving your words with my piece Gwen x Reply
Syd13 May 2021, 16:26 Hi Gwen, I've never been good at writing brevity myself but you've certainly nailed this one. So much said in so little words. A sad write but very acute. - Syd Reply
Gwendoline13 May 2021, 17:39 Wow many many thanks Syd, such wonderful feedback and encouragement Gwen x Reply
Neville11 September 2021, 01:39 been there, done that and wore the tee shirt out .. this was simply crying out to be writ Gwen x Reply
Gwendoline11 September 2021, 03:55 Awe thanks for looking back on my poetry my friend, I am sorry this was relatable for you x Reply
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Wow great write! Short but it really gets through, good job.
Thanks ever so much MB, I am so grateful for your read and for leaving your words with my piece
Gwen x
i love it short to the point and leaves nothing unsaid ,...
Many thanks 🙏 😊
Hi Gwen,
I've never been good at writing brevity myself but you've certainly nailed this one. So much said in so little words.
A sad write but very acute.
- Syd
Wow many many thanks Syd, such wonderful feedback and encouragement
Gwen x
wonderful poem
Many many thanks Greg x
You’re so welcome
been there, done that and wore the tee shirt out .. this was simply crying out to be writ Gwen x
Awe thanks for looking back on my poetry my friend, I am sorry this was relatable for you x