Story of Abel

Sweetheart
Has Cain found your name
Written across the backstreets
Tarnished with all the pain
Bronze eyes look in shame.
I wonder are we the same
My love is only so strong that he won't go insane
Stay close by the waters
The lord will keep thy name
I don't know if anyone sees you
Crying in the rain
I just watch
And pray
Hoping I'll never see your grave
Your soul as sweet as fruit
Your lips like sunrise
On a summers day
Oh how I marvel at your ways.
Even in the olden days
Because of your sweet fragrance
Cain will see errors in your ways
Like a broken clay
Dropped to the driveway.
They will hang you up like ornaments
To scare the hearts of slaves
And God knows what they've done
Your blood cried from the pavement
Your last breath you have to pay
Just so Cain can have all
And bury you in graves.

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WOW!!? BRITTNEY!!!...... this is fantastic metaphorical story telling........ weaving the story Cain's jealousy against his brother into some seriously "smokin' grooves!"....... the flow of this when you read it aloud showing off some seriously great craftsmanship......." They will hang you up like ornaments to scare the heart's of slaves.."........ some VERY vivid phrasing painting powerful imagery!!........ALL STARS!!...... had to PIN this as well....... wanna read it again....... well done girlfriend!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo. ?☀✴✳
Thank you so much!! I am flattered! And also very thankful that you understood the metaphor. When a lot of my friends read it, they had no idea what I meant at all! Thanks for the comment!
The lovely metaphoric piece...I love the flow of words...I was almost rapping it out loud while reading...Nice
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE KIND WORDS! I am so glad that you liked it!