Story of my life
They say living life isnāt what itās cracked up to be, hmm so sit down hereās a little story from me.
Ā A story about what could potentially be, but now in his thoughts itās a version that is destined to see. Being discriminated to the fact that he couldnāt breathe, he puts holes in the walls with both of his fists till they bleed. A reputation that is viewed from a broken angle itself will lead you wrong to the deep deep products of hell.Ā
As he screams, this is a prison wonāt you let me outta my cell?Ā Ā
You got the key and now you think that you know me so well, as my heart begins to stop youāre ruthless to the point that you couldnāt tell.Ā Ā
Breathe! breathe! I keep telling myself, stranded at the bottom, I survived, my pain is hidden so well. Canāt begin to let go, why you surrender in hell, this is my life to you, itās therapy how about find someone to help.
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Hi Kyle such a deep meaning you have created with your poem, I enjoyed it a lot. Best wishes to you. TFOTS
Thank you so much Iām glad you liked it! Iām real rough around the edges in my writings donāt know how many people are really into the deep stuff that really hits a person hard.
Poetry in my humble opinion is to release feelings that may connect with and help another, or just help the writer see their writing and give of their feelings another perspective. Mostly it is for ourselves. Your poem is heart felt, and gave me another perspective. Thanks for sharing...Jim
That means a lot Jim! Really and truly poetry is my safe zone has been since I was 15 years old and now the more I understand it the more I see that it helps others. Thereās so much in life that people over look and feelings in this generation is a huge one. I write and speak hoping it speaks to others and makes it much more comfortable knowing that it does reach out to others!
Great Job Kyle, thanks for sharing. Warm regards.
Nice write š¹
Very well written a great insight. Well done xxx