Suicide
Darkness reaches out his hand
Said to jump and I shall receive
I hesitated for a moment
He said jump and believe
He said its easy
Let the pain go
That when I jump of the chair
My pain no one will know
He said I will fly
Far away from here
That pain will go away
All this will disappear
The rope around my neck
The tears down my face
I'm the out cast girl
I don't fit in any place
So the ropes hooked to the ceiling fan
And the note is in place
Life is moving to fast
I can't keep up the pace
I step into to darkness
Right off the chair
Now I dangle lifeless
In the air
My note lay in her hands
As my father holds her there
But before I lost my life
They didn't seem to care
My mother drops the note
And my dad curses under his breath
In the note it said
' This is for the best '
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Hey TERRI!! ~ a very compelling piece on VERY powerful subject matter.......well constructed narrative with a strong sense of rhythm and timing.........well conceived & delivered......with formatting delivering a perfect rhyme scheme........ALL STARS......well done.......and.......WELCOME to COSMO.........peace........T xo
Welcome to Cosmofunnel !
Thoroughly deserved nomination for the contest.
Looking forward to reading more from you !
Best wishes. :)
WOW TERRI what poem makes me wanted cry great poem
Powerful write. Hit too close to home. Thank you for sharing! Lots of love,
Val ?
Empathy ✌
Love this, it hits home!! My wife's sisters friend, hang herself couple days ago!!! Only 14!! It's sad how most people that's the only escape from this world!!! I'm praying for a better world!!