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Suicide

Darkness reaches out his hand
Said to jump and I shall receiveย 
I hesitated for a moment
He said jump and believeย 
He said its easyย 
Let the pain go
That when I jump of the chair
My pain no one will know
He said I will fly
Far away from here
That pain will go awayย 
All this will disappearย 

The rope around my neck
The tears down my face
I'm the out cast girl
I don't fit in any placeย 
So the ropes hooked to the ceiling fan
And the note is in place
Life is moving to fast
I can't keep up the pace
I step into to darknessย 
Right off the chair
Now I dangle lifeless
In the air
My note lay in her hands
As my father holds her there
But before I lost my life
They didn't seem to care
My mother drops the note
And my dad curses under his breath
In the note it said
' This is for the best '

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Tony Taylor

Hey TERRI!! ~ a very compelling piece on VERY powerful subject matter.......well constructed narrative with a strong sense of rhythm and timing.........well conceived & delivered......with formatting delivering a perfect rhyme scheme........ALL STARS......well done.......and.......WELCOME to COSMO.........peace........T xo

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Richard Waters

Welcome to Cosmofunnel !

Thoroughly deserved nomination for the contest.

Looking forward to reading more from you !

Best wishes. ย :)

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Greg Etsell

WOW TERRI what poem makes me wanted cry great poem

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Valerie Lynn

Powerful write. Hit too close to home. Thank you for sharing! Lots of love,

Val ?

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Taz Limkeman

Love this, it hits home!! My wife's sisters friend, hang herself couple days ago!!! Only 14!! It's sad how most people that's the only escape from this world!!! I'm praying for a better world!!

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