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Sunset Shines

Sunset Shines

A slippery soliloquy
Of sandy seas
And singing souls
Where sunset shines, a star
And the seashells of someday
Slip silently ashore
Vignette of satisfaction

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Tony Taylor

Absolutely beautiful use of alliteration to convey a truly compelling idea....

        ~ "....the seashells of someday..."

ALL STARS!!......succinctly creative stuff!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ??✴✴❤

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Dean Kuch

This poem is an alliteration lover's wet dream, Anna, if you'll pardon the pun.
I happen to be a proponent of alliteration when it is used properly.
This most certainly was.
Lovely imagery.
Great writing!
~Dean Kuch

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