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Suppose To Be

Suppose To Be

Thought we'd grow old together, make memories and bicker back and forth like siblings do. Watch each others children grow. Attend graduations, weddings and births. Lean on each other through the deaths and tragedies. Camp in our favorite spots, play hide and seek in the dark. Wild car rides with music blasting. I thought I'd have a lifetime of your unforgetable onory grin and big brother bear hugs. That was how it was suppose to be. Today I reflect on our childhood together. There are some good memories there. I followed you anywhere and wanted to be just like you. Jump ahead to when we both had families. Makes me smile thinking of our children playing together. You asked me to accept your wife and love her like a sister. Guess what brother, I still do. I sure do miss you. But most of all I miss how life was suppose to be. 

  L. Mack
   6/7/18
    In memory of my brother
      Lance Mack
        3/18/67 - 6/7/06

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Dean Kuch

Thirty-nine-years young is far too soon to meet one's maker, Lori.
I am very sorry you lost your brother, and so young at that.
It sounds as if you were both very close, and rightly so.
This is a lovely tribute and a shining ode to his memory.
Well done.
You have my sympathies.
~Dean

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Lori Mack

Thank you Dean. Yes my brother and I were very close. 12 years ago today we lost him. Some years I'm do ok, but this year... I just really miss him. God bless you. 

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Dean Kuch

You're very welcome, Lori.
I just lost my father last Thursday so I can relate.
God bless you & yours as well.

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Lori Mack

I am so sorry for your loss, heaven's gain. You and your family are in my prayers. 

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Dean Kuch

Thank you.
I wrote a poem titled "True Riches" and dedicated it to my dad.
I think you might like it if you get a chance to take a peek.
Be strong, and thanks again for your thoughtful condolences.
~Dean

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Lori Mack

I will check it out now. I have on called "a wife's love" it has to do with my father's passing.

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