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Surrender

Surrender

I heard it repeating,
that voice in my ear,
andĀ  wondered once moreĀ 
if redemption was near.
It seemed to get louder
then faded away..
No, thatā€™s not redemption
Iā€™m hearing today!

It lingers around inĀ 
my cochlear womb.
Its muted words screaming
in that vacuumed tomb.
I canā€™t or I donā€™t
Want to hear it out loud,
I guess itā€™s unlikely
to make me feel proud

Itā€™s there all the time
with itā€™s deep throaty hiss,
creepsĀ  inside my thoughts
like an unwelcomed kiss.
Distraction just fails to
keep itā€™s voice away,
it screams through the night
and most of the day.

It keeps on repeating
demanding a voice,
Iā€™m feeling so weak now
I donā€™t have a choice.
I bit my lips hard,
it brings tears to my eyes,
andĀ  although I WAS right..
I will Ā apologise!

Ā 

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StevieC

Ā Really interesting piece and as always with an understandable story..I must be getting old as so often i read stuff and dont have the slightest clue what it's meant to be about!- your pieces, thankfully, are not justĀ  pretentious waffle but actually poetic storytelling .that requires real talent which you have! Enjoyed this very much .

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