Poem -
Surrender
Without a word of protest or denial
layer upon layer of passion did pile
waiting restlessly beneath skin aflame
grew a beast of desire that none could tame
As hips gyrated before his widened eyes
briefest of brushes of skin surmise
flashes of intense lust not romantic lies
all notions of restraint within oneself dies
Perchance this would be more than a spell
which drives towards Heaven instead of Hell
there sitting stirring in the loins so well
racing heart rose in the throat then fell
A kiss from lips so moist and tender
did she upon his sensitive neck did render
broken the boundaries of intimacy this offender
whispered simply the word "Surrender"
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Wow Mr.Blair!!.........very cool write sir!.........I haven't read you before..........but this reveals a great sense of timing and rhythm..........you nailed the heck out of this subject matter.........well done............and WELCOME to COSMO!!............smiles..........TÂ xx
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Sweet!
wow... i crave this
where each line takes a thought but is easily digested
not just temptation, but the questions a deeper mind must always ask
a most genuine bravo, and a follow
check my work, let me know what yo uthink
thanks!
Heyyy Travis!! Awesome poem! 5*s!!
Val â„
glad you enjoyed it Val!
trav