Poem -
Sweet
On the sweet side , having sweet dreams . On the sour side , having upsetting things . Consistent even flow of sweet tastes , sugary things . Or sour pugint odor interrupting things. Many have called me a dark angel known my sweet personality . Some have tasted the sour bitter me . I have a erge towards no trickery , no sweet faced devil is going to sour me . Carry on in the dark . Lemon up sour people . Sweeten up turmoil and awaken randomness .
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Wow LILIANA!!......I REALLY like the intricate wordplay that you have intermingled through this piece...... it gives the entirety of it a fine lofty-ness about it ~ ESPECIALLY when you read this aloud!! ~
~ "Or sour pungent odor interrupting things
Many have called me a Dark Angel
Known my sweet personality
Some have tasted the sour, bitter, me
I have an urge towards no trickery..."
Some friggin' brilliant phrasing inside dear poets sister!!.......ALL STARS!!..... well penned!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo. : )
Thank you very much Tony .