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The Sweet Freedom of Indifference

The Sweet Freedom of Indifference

Watching the men of war

standing hungry and waiting

with sword in hand

to plunder

to penetrate the walls

she has carefully erected

she stays resolute with steely will

She's the woman

who gave up on love

the unreachable one

staying ahead of the pain

holding memories

tight to her bosom

closing every door

throwing away every key

warming between her legs

with the sweet freedom of indifference    

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Christopher Correia

Garth Brooks, thanks Flower....I went on Youtube and listened to it and it made me cry like a babyman; what a sad and profound song; Garth captured everything in that song; not a big fan of most of his other songs, but that one moved me for sure... that is a truly great song; damn, I'm going to go listen to it again, but this time I hope I don't cry....cheers my friend

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Brenda Keough

Beautiful words angel it's nice to see you writing.... yes has indifference has many forms should we all remove indifference from our souls and become one with love.... the biggest fear is what we hold within our mind not our hearts

Love and hugs angel had a great life journey

Giggles the Poet

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Bradford

Hi Chris I can see a woman shutting down and closing her doors because she is tired of getting hurt like she has before.  The dance is by garth brooks . Was this poem based on it some ? Cheers hrl

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Christopher Correia

hey HRL, yeah basically that is what the poem is about, she is not tired of getting hurt she can see the bs so clearly and her standards are very high, I remember who inspired it but I'm not at liberty to say, lol...thanks for comment pal

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