Poem -
SWEET SERENITY
Oh sweet serenity
come hither to me
Let sleep be a passageway
in dreams to thee
And when at last i sleep
i dream of the moment
That is spent in your arms
in that passion so potent
It is an intoxicating potion
you inject in my vein
Taking me to the heavens
and back again
An elixir of love mixed
in for good measure
For uniting us both in this
relationships endeavor
I know it is but a dream
and if only that,then let it be
I will be satisfied you are
here, just you and me
So kiss me and hold me love me
with all you can give
Oh sweet serenity in my dreams
with you, I choose to live
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Comments
Dreams wow one area I dont understand ...great write
Hi mark I love nice dreams you never forget
Glad you you enjoyed
best wishes Debs
Hey DEBS!!...... this is BEAUTIFULLY well crafted........I Love how you take the reader into the dream in the beginning .......and then the clever ending where you choose to live in the "Sweet Serenity"......... this is lovely writing sweet poetess!!........ALL STARS......... Love It!!........ smiles.......T xo
Hi Tony Thank you for your insight into this write
you explained it as how i wanted it to read
so glad you enjoyed it
love and hugs Debs xo
hey deborah, terrific rhyming flowing quality in this poem, felt like I was gliding on a perfect sheet of ice lake, in the middle of summer, spoke to my senses just like that, you have a unique ability to affect the senses directly with your words, well appreciated by the reader, thank you, really good post, cheers
Hi Christopher What lovely comments
Thank you very much I am glad you enjoyed
best wishes Debs
Hi Dear Debs,
Remember, sometimes dreams come true. That "Sweet Serenity" could become a reverent reality. So, dream at night, for some day your dream will be real.
Hugs, Peace and Love,
xox Larry
Hi Larry Thank you for your heartfelt
words means a lot
love n hugs Debs xox
Hi Debs,
Wow! You`ve really excelled yourself with this piece sweetie, well done. I loved the way you have crafted it and it just flows so beautifully. What a pleasure for all your readers this piece is, I`m so proud of you.
You have nothing to fear with your writing because you simply have oodles of talent. This describes such a romantic dream that we all need every now and again to cheer us all up and give us faith because they really do come true for us when we meet that special someone.
God bless
Hugs and love
G xx
Hi G Wow your spoiling me but i`m honored you have read
and commented on my writes. This one is a bit of a favorite
of mine i must admit I can`t really explain why i just think
i had a really good feeling writing it.
Thank you for your kind words again
much love Debs xx