Poem -
Take a bow
Touch the ground
Breathe the sky
It won't satisfyΒ
It's all a lie
If you think it will
Stand still and see
What the eyes view naturally
What can't be seenΒ
Is all a dream
And you've been here before
Try not to deceive
Instead be relieved
You've probably Been through worst
This was all rehearsed
Before your time
Inn a god like mind
Relax and find
That in due time
It's time to bow
Before the crowd
Curtain closed
Applause and smiles
All worth while
A hundred years
Is one hell of a show
To live through tears
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Hey BRITTNEY!!....... this is VERY compelling stuff....... metaphysically enigmatic approach to some VERY profound subject matter........ the afterlife........I enjoyed the way you wove this together as though it were all a big production number........ where, although the curtain had closed, and you had taken your final bow, life still continued........"A hundred years is one hell of a show.."........VERY cool!!.......I remember you now....... so glad you're back on the pages sweet poetess...... or maybe I should just say Writer...... because I noticed you do a bunch of short stories as well!!........ fistful-O-Stars!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo. β΄ββ΄β³
Thank you so much for the kind words! I always enjoy hearing from you for one because of how excited you always are about anything!! And also, I don't really know how to write stories cause I tend to keep going and it always turns into a book lol Nost of these are excerpts from a longer piece lol But hopefully I will be reading more of your work soon and hearing from you more!! Thanks again!