Poem -
Take my hand !
Let me stand by you
hold your hand
through the darkness
let me shoulder some
of your pain and misery
for darkness in its wrath
will linger in your soul
until its pulled patiently
bit by bit
until the light shines through
that infusion of love and hope
will erode the dreary past
so self-love will prevail
let me be your rock
lean on me
take my hand !
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Comments
I loved this Tina, pure and simply!! Had an angelic feel to it, one of my favourites that I have read from you! A big 5*s and nomination from me!! A truly lovely piece :)
thank you rachel !! much appreciated tina x
Tina! You hit it on the head! The hand of God is the only hand that can pull extricate you from difficulties! In Isaiah 50:2 God begs the question: "Is my hand shortened at all that it cannot save? Or have I not power to deliver?…" The answer is YES! Great write!
val
thank you val ,i actually wrote this thinking of my son who fights depression and what would god say to him ? what could i say to him? thank you very much for the beautiful comment tina x
tina
thank you! this is a lovely reminder, one much needed! its so easy to get caught up in it, to take your eye off the ball, and so quickly do we end up in misery! I have neglected to grasp this hand, who once held me in grace, that emits hope, and fulfills the longing in our souls!
I appreciate you, thanks for sharing
thank you stephen for a comment so heartfelt ! we all at some point or another fail to do that but its always there to grasp no-matter ,thank you ! tina x
Tina Moore,
An Excellent write and a beautiful image, Thanks for sharing
Regards
Williamsji Maveli