Take off song

I see fields of trees, that I planted too.
Beroucrocy and all that they screw, and I think to myself, what a horrible world.
I see hope in the young, that's unfounded two, all the silent screams of me and you.
And I think to myself, why can't I change the world.
I hear the complaints, so bad what they put you though.
And I think to myself what can I do.
And then I remember it's an unjust world.
And then I remember, it's an unjust world.

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Comments
Very clever contrast to the popular song. I really liked the path you took with this one. Fantastic poetry. The world feels a bit screwed up right now for sure
Thank you. I liked this one myself.
I agree with Fish, you took a classic song by Louis Armstrong and twisted it to a more fitting perspective. The world (especially of late) has gone bonkers
Great writing
Gwen :)
Agreed.