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Take off song

I see fields of trees, that I planted too. 

Beroucrocy and all that they screw, and I think to myself, what a horrible world. 

I see hope in the young, that's unfounded two, all the silent screams of me and you. 

And I think to myself, why can't I change the world. 

I hear the complaints, so bad what they put you though. 

And I think to myself what can I do. 

And then I remember it's an unjust world. 
And then I remember, it's an unjust world. 

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The fish of the sea

Very clever contrast to the popular song. I really liked the path you took with this one. Fantastic poetry. The world feels a bit screwed up right now for sure

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Gwendoline

I agree with Fish, you took a classic song by Louis Armstrong and twisted it to a more fitting perspective. The world (especially of late) has gone bonkers 
Great writing 
Gwen :)

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