Tell Me What You See; Staring into Darkness

He was a hitchhiker on the road to nowhere
Until she drove him to her City of Darkness
Fed bedded and content he lost his wanderlust
Under her erotic spell finding a new compass
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Never catching sight of any light in her eyes;
As he gazed her crystal blue revolvers; still he
Found beauty in the ashes, joy in the dirty love
Great the addiction and tightly it clung to him
...
Stronger than a current she pulled on his will
Held his foolish heart in hand just to plunder,
Words and lethal kisses took his soul captive
Yet he felt he was the cure for her dark nature
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With eyes closed tight he entered the whirlwind
Opening up Pandora’s Box but finding it empty;
A hallow soul in the dark, abandoned and alone
Smoking a cigarette lost in her safe warm reality
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A sudden rationalization came to him-- then
He wordlessly declared; at her vacant stare
That she was not a believer in rainbows,
White picket fences or sunshine after the rain
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A storm came, and colors lost the way home
She never knew religion or love in any person
Only the constant biting hunger of the skin; sex
Was not her cure but a temporary diversion
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Comfort she did provide and he wanted it often;
In copious measures taking all the fragile virtue
She offered, and for a while it felt like love, but
Longing was all she really knew of connection
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She brushed away the notion in a gesture
Dismissed the idea altogether, with a smile
Then turned around and walked away forever
Never to his black broken soul ever to return
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Comments
I d agree with CHERIE SUMNER, the ending is sad.....sex is deceptive true....however it baffles me but I am interested in finding out where this poem came from......what inspired it...just curious.
I loved the flow....kept wanting to read the next line ..... the imagery was good as always....you write very well and mature.
Smiles,
Pepper.
Heya Curtis, i disagree with the ladies above, id love to be her, planning on picking up a hitchhiker soon lol, you invented a wicked woman in a weak mans world of sexual desire, i like it, well done brother xoxo
I know a guy who's eye's are a trap, i never look him in the face haha