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Thank you God

The Mirror

I look in the mirror what do i see

Gods creation staring back  me

spots on my face boobz down to my knee

yup thats his creation is what i can see

Fat on my hips because i eat too much chips, jelly around belly, stretch marks around my my back,

clothes that don’t fit, yes its me and i'm fat.

Close my eyes and open again, i'm still there big smile on my face, in the mirror i stare.

Guess what i am happy, guess  what im alive, guess what i am pain free and im fifty five.

Thank you God for the eyes  that I can see to look in to the mirror i look and see its me . 

I can walk, i can talk, i can  smel,l i can touch ,

Thank you God as i look in the mirror at me

written by laurette josiah

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laurette

Yes he can be too funny Kimmy .

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Tony Taylor

This is AWESOME LAURETTE!!......I felt a VERY personal connection to this piece..... I'm about the same age...... I've been dealing with chronic pain and a strange disease for five years.....during that time I have developed an incredible relationship with God..... most of my poetry is on spirituality and metaphysics........ my blog is dedicated to the energy that leads to understanding my path to GOD!!....... this poem reminds me so much of myself...... grateful that I can still touch, walk(barely), and Love myself and others......thanx for this amazing reminder .......ALL STARS!!....... well done sweet poetess!!........LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo. ?☀✴✳

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laurette

Thank you Tony i am pleased that you my writing connected to you in some way , all of my poems are based on experience and feeling that  i have had  or people that i know have been through such events , i also look at world situations and write my feeling, i have know time or space , it just happens, sometimes i will wake up out of my sleep and start writing then another time there will be nothing. thank you so much for taking time to read my poems and comment, the last one i wrote about my baby phoebe is my true story ,i lost her in may last year i woke up out of my sleep and i wrote that.

As for your poetry i can say that your gift for writing  is truly amazing .

Blessing to you 

I still havent got the hang of how this site works, so i hope you get this comment .

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