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THANK YOU MAM X

THANK YOU MAM X

I felt you around me today mam
when i had all those doubts and fears
But  you`ve always been there to comfort me
and  wipe away my tears
You knew i`ve been strong for too long now
and it sure has taken its toll
But that`s what i try to do, pretend all`s fine
and i`m hitting every, goal
Then you came to me in a dream last night
chastising, as you often did
In my dream i was talking back to you
saying " ok! mam i`m an adult! not a kid"
When i awoke this morning i decided
to follow the good advice you gave
And today i`m feeling better, i listened
to what you told me,and i did`nt misbehave :-)
And even though you told me off somewhat
now i know that your still there​​
Because you connected with me in my dream
showing me all the love we share..
 

 

 

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Cherie  Story to this write is i had a really important appointment
today i have been putting it off all the time, then last night i dreamed of my 
mother and she was giving me a row lol So i went and i am so much happier 
i did.Everyone says how alike we are, they used to say we looked like sister`s
Thank you for your lovely comment it is heartfelt
Love n hugs Debs xox

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Tony Taylor

Hey DEBS!!........ It's amazing how dreams or premonitions can affect our lives and actions......... especially when we take them seriously.......... so much too be learned from the subconscious state........... you must have been close with your mother......... even though, like most of us, we have those moments when we think our mom may be a little loopy (lol)!!......... the honesty running through this piece makes it a VERY compelling and relatable read!!.......... lovely my friend!!........, hugs-n-smiles...........T xo

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Tony  I have such vivid dreams i have dreamed things that happen often 
I am glad i listened to the dream of my mother, Yes you are right mam`s do have them loopy 
moments mine had a few lol, Thanks so much for your lovely comments, my friend 
hugs Debs xo
 

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Deborah Evans

Hi Flower Girl  It is beautiful that although our loved one 
 have passed they are near sending messages in dreams
showing their love and care always
so glad you enjoyed love n hugs Debs xo

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Georgina Richardson

Hi Debs,

This is a wonderful piece sweetie that expresses so much. I have had many visions and dreams of my Andrew and my parents. They came to me in a vision while I was sat in the car and it was to tell me that it was time that Andrew was going to have to leave me. They also said that they would be there to collect him. Just before he died he said "mam! nanny and granddad are here!" then he said I love you and he closed his eyes. So we do live on, we go back home when our time is up but we all get back together again. That is a great comfort to me and I`m so glad that I am mediumistic when I need to be for them. I firmly believe in the afterlife because I have had personal proof and it has brought me closer to God also.

God bless sweetie and well done for a beautifully well written wonderful piece, I`m very, very proud of you, your talent is amazing sweetie.

I love you dearly

G xx

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Deborah Evans

Hi G  I love to have these dreams of my
loved ones passed they are comforting to me
I have dreamed of things not nice too... 
which have happened,after i have dreamed them
 and they have scared me somewhat.How comforting for
you that Andrew said " Mam! Nanny and Granddad are here "
validating your Vision. I also believe there is an afterlife
wholeheartedly.Thanks so much G for your lovely comment
i appreciate them so much   love to you Debs xx
 

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Larry Ran

Oh, Dear Debs,

What a beautiful tribute  of love to your dear Mother.  I, too, often dream of my Mother or my Father, and so cherish being with them again.  They still are there bringing us the warmth and love that we so dearly miss.  Such a lovely story!

Hugs, Peace and Love,

xox Larry

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Deborah Evans

Hi Larry Thanks for your comments on this one 
sorry for getting back to you late, I love dreaming of 
my loved passed ones, i really think they are connecting with us
and as you say still bringing us warmth and love. glad you enjoyed 
love n hugs Debs xox
 

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