Poem -

That Afterwards Feeling

Right here and now,
how I ache
for that afterwards feeling ..
That post
love making,
easy
just being here and now
with you,
kind of feeling ..
The kind
you
might read about in posh
magazines ..
Or after
a full English for breakfast ..
And
then maybe,
just sipping a few cold beers
on a balcony,
with a real good friend
and maybe a cigarette even ..
Or what
about that
last day of school,
kind of feeling,
like falling in love all over again ..
Then
there’s that
dreamy
almost awake,
part asleep kind of feeling ..
When you
find without looking
the fiver you
always knew
that you had in a pocket ..
But could not
locate it until you had
savoured
that afterwards feeling again ..

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Lorna

A couple of years ago, I had the crappiest of days, I'd been trying to navigate the day and my sister called and asked me for help. I was very disgruntled but of course I went to help her...only to find her and my neice had bought me a gift...knowing, what a day I was having...it made me cry happy tears
but it was such a feeling
Love this
Lorna x

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Neville

Sadly those moments are few and far between aren't they .. thanks for sharing Lorna .. I guess that's why we tend to remember them .. Neville thanks you x

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Neville

You sweet talker you .. thanks a bundle PD .. N :)Β 

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Mark Olcott

like reading a poem that reminds you of important things after a long night
thanks Neville

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Neville

then it was well worth me posting bless you my friend .. NevilleΒ 

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Shaun Cronick

You nailed it there Nev and such a delicious feeling it is too.
Some maybe fleeting... but well worth the wait and any are warmly welcomed.
A feel good write and good un too.
All good things to you sir :)
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Neville

Hey Shaun, thank you so much mate .. I get a distinct buzz when I notice you have called by .. Hope you have a FAB weekend and don't work too hard .. All Good Things, NevilleΒ 

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