That devilish Grin
Oh my god you smiled again
i tried to turn my head but oh that grin
you reeled me in
it mustve been a sinĀ
that devilish grin
i didnt want to fall for you again
but the butterflies with in brought your arms around my heartĀ
i didnt bother with a fight
my heart was no longer mineĀ
you made me melt inside
until something caught your eye
you pushed me asideĀ
i was no longer fineĀ
tears washed out my eyes
you left me burned insideĀ
my heart was now a metal tin
nothing going in nothing to come out
the pain ached within
i yearned for your devilish grin
it struck me again
i keep letting you win
You grabbed my tinĀ
gave it some light put a spell inside no longer mine
captivated with you i grabbed the tin shapped it right painted it red and fell to youĀ
i tried to push it aside
keep it silent- i tried
soon again this painted tin began knocking withinĀ
i opened it up and came to find all the butterflies that flew me to you you caught my butterfliesĀ
held them in your eyes
smiledĀ
and once again i fell for that devilish grinĀ
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Hi Samred, great write. Welcome to cosmofunnel. Warm regards.
this poem is a joy to read, Samred136, it has an unusual beat, and when you go into the 'tin can' imagery your lines take on a sharp, dramatic almost staccato tone; could be the way I'm reading it, but it sounds very cool....yeah, this one does have a distinctive and lovely 'sound' to it, that I really enjoyed, very good write poet, cheers Ā
Thanks its actually something i wrote a while ago my writing has changed a lot i was curious of how someone would react to this type of writing.