That devilish Grin
Oh my god you smiled again
i tried to turn my head but oh that grin
you reeled me in
it mustve been a sin
that devilish grin
i didnt want to fall for you again
but the butterflies with in brought your arms around my heart
i didnt bother with a fight
my heart was no longer mine
you made me melt inside
until something caught your eye
you pushed me aside
i was no longer fine
tears washed out my eyes
you left me burned inside
my heart was now a metal tin
nothing going in nothing to come out
the pain ached within
i yearned for your devilish grin
it struck me again
i keep letting you win
You grabbed my tin
gave it some light put a spell inside no longer mine
captivated with you i grabbed the tin shapped it right painted it red and fell to you
i tried to push it aside
keep it silent- i tried
soon again this painted tin began knocking within
i opened it up and came to find all the butterflies that flew me to you you caught my butterflies
held them in your eyes
smiled
and once again i fell for that devilish grin
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Hi Samred, great write. Welcome to cosmofunnel. Warm regards.
this poem is a joy to read, Samred136, it has an unusual beat, and when you go into the 'tin can' imagery your lines take on a sharp, dramatic almost staccato tone; could be the way I'm reading it, but it sounds very cool....yeah, this one does have a distinctive and lovely 'sound' to it, that I really enjoyed, very good write poet, cheers
Thanks its actually something i wrote a while ago my writing has changed a lot i was curious of how someone would react to this type of writing.