Poem -

That Last Time Look

the end is in sight for shore .. by the way, that's not a spelling error folks ..

Although far more
than just
a casual glance ..
But less intense
than a dedicated
stare, of course ..
That last time look
simply cut him up ..
How he so
very much wished
he had gone
blind long before
she had time to cast
it ashore,  
from the bow of the
craft that which
then bore her name ..

 

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Marion

Neville...this might be one of your most beautiful works...so bloody poignant X

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Neville

Thank you .. all of which will do nicely, very nicely indeed M x

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