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The Absoluteness of Love

The Absoluteness of Love

    I am planting my love in a flowerpot
    and cultivating it with tenderness
    and gentle drops of rain

    I am placing my love on a book page
    so he can learn how to love me back,
    perhaps from the whispers
    of those ancient pages

    I am wrapping my love in moonlight
    and let him quietly rest
    upon the breasts of a red rose.
    I want to know what love is!

     --Bernadete vdw, '24

                                       

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Marion

Another beautiful write B. Presented so very gently and with the most loving of green fingers... hugs x

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Bernadete van d...

Nice way to see it Marion. Cheers for reading this. 
Hello from Bernadete 💗

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Bernadete van d...

Hi HumanSpark, thank you for your lovely words. Please know that it’s very much appreciated.

 

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Bernadete van d...

Hi Bernie, great to receive your thoughts. What a wonderful way to see this. Ah, “resting upon the breasts of a flower” it’s from my poem “Brevity of Time”.
You have a such good memory, mate. It only says that when you read a poem, you pay attention. 
Keep well my friend. 

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Neville

Absolutely bloomin delightful poetry Bernadete .. Neville 

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Neville

In fact I liked it so much, I came back for another helping .. Neville 😎👍

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John Loopstra

Glad to have found you by way of Marion... Like this a lot, the tenderness and the teaching. It took my wife a hard fight getting me out of the trenches, not for not wanting, but for the complications of a childhood (though hers was even more in need of a hard fight... We got ourselves out of the swamps eventually, having been married for only 37 years now and not rueing one minute🤗. Gonna read some more

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Bernadete van d...

What a nice surprise! Nice to meet you, John.
Leaving the trenches and getting out of the swamps
takes a great deal of courage and willpower. I am glad you did.
Give each other a tap on the back and a good cuddle.
Happy writings. 
Bernadete

 

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John Loopstra

Well, yes, but is also gives me a lot of poetry, much of what I write is generalized into words...

Just curious (being Dutch): have you any idea of your Dutch roots (surname can only be originally Dutch - the Flemish would have made it into Vanderwielen in most cases).

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Bernadete van d...

You are looking at the bright side of life, it's so good to see, John.
it gave you lots of Poetry, and I hope you'll always find comfort in 
the arms of poetry. Greetings,
Bernadete 

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John Loopstra

Thanx, looking at the bright side has been the saving of our lives, it kept us fighting for s better future. It does nobody any good remaining miserable, besides, some of the hurts were done over 50 years ago😱😅, about time we let go🤗

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