The Answer Question

The body lies trapped in the soul’s snare;
choking it inch by slow inch that merciless sprite
neither lets it die nor does it kill.
Wonder which grudge is it holding upon.
Such a sudden, vicious clutch at the throat
that the body thrashes desperate
praying for the breaths to cease.
The wily soul however, keeps it lassoed
with that final breath.
Eyes forget to blink, staring in terror as
the soul sharpens its claws, deliberate
and malicious on the millstone of time.
It’ll be one of those days again, when
every layer of thought will be scraped raw
plucking and snipping the seams of memories.
May it just rip out and uproot all feeling,
cast them into that smoldering inferno,
forever turned into black ash, never again
ever to be sensed by the body.
Smiling with diabolical coldness instead, the soul
one after the other, meticulously lines up
a glaringly exposed, stark naked parade of
every plucked feeling, every incised memory,
in the sadist flickering of that infernal light.
There’s no respite behind eyelids shut tight
for this graphic tirade brands itself
as a sizzling retinal scar, marked forever
if ever at all it heals, though with every intent
to eternally fester, an oozing wound.
Amidst every grip of its talons, every choke,
every rip of its claws, every frigid smile of its
devilish lips, amidst every thrash,
every scream of the tortured body, the soul
had not uttered a single word
nor made the faintest noise. Nothing
but a cold unwavering maniacal stare at
the Body, slipknotted with that final breath.
At length, in reply to its every question
the Soul simply whispered its own-
“Now, why should this mirror terrify you so?”
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Hi, I loved this so much I'm a little speechless of how to express it enough to do my feelings justice! Your choice of words, in description, sent me other worldly! Imagining the soul, and body in a place and way, so vivid and articulated... Brilliantly! Engrossing, all the way to its final, and fantastic ending!Â
much love.
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Shukriya so very much for such a generous and kind review of my humble words John; I sincerely appreciate it. :-)
Hi Sambit, I cant even pick out a line, it is just line after line of just exceptional poetry! I really enjoyed this ..... so so much. You have such a unique way with words....This is terrifying,(I may even have nightmares)....But absolutely brilliant
Lorna :D x
This is really so sweet and generous of you Lorna! I am humbled. Shukriya so much!
I am terribly sorry in advance if you get any nightmares though I sincerely hope you don't! I had written this a few years ago, originally in Hindi, during one of the darkest phases of my personal life and some parts of the poem are borrowed from my nightmares and sleep deprived hallucinations.
Shukriya once again!
No need to apologize, :D great art comes from the darkest of places...I loved this
Lorna xx
:-)
Well, it quite often does!
Each claustrophobic image...each chest-tightening line slides inevitably into the next, squeezing the breath out of the reader till you're left gasping for air...staring at that final line, that question, and wondering the very same thing.
Magnificent!
J ;)
You really are too generous and kind to my work! I am deeply humbled and always truly appreciate your encouraging reviews. Shukriya so much Jason!
Wow!!!
Spectacular!
I love seeing greatness;
I could pinch the cheeks on your face it was so good.
I'm excited for you and what your going to do in the future.
from Elaine
Shukriya so much Elaine! This is so very generous, sweet and kind of you! :-)
Am humbled and sincerely appreciate your gesture.