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THE AUDIECE IN ARE LIFE

The sun will rise and the birds
will sing as we get up in the
morning and write poem and 
we look for audiece in are life
to read are poem or story
in books the newspaper 
online and hope they 
say wonderful poem
and we say thank you
for reading your so kind
and are ego may get 
to the best of us all 
and we always try to be 
humble and we all stand
on the stage with are poems
hopeing the audiece in are
life will always be there

 

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Jill Tait

Yes this is very true Greg Well done & pinned for you ❤️💙❤️

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Jill I know it’s true for me because wherever Go Will say will you read my poem or did you see my Poems  in the paper 

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Marion Price

So so true Greg....what beautiful words you have written. I have pinned also my friend. Hugs 💕

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Marion Price

You are very very welcome Greg...hugs back 💖

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Cherie Leigh

HI Greg. We are like family on Cosmo..and I always enjoy reading your work. I think we write for ourselves first, and then hope others will like what we post. It is nice to be recognized.  The audience that means most to me is you guys!  I like to read to be inspired and then hope I can inspire too.  I like the honesty of this write. Bravo!  ox Love n Hugs xo 

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Greg Etsell

Yes we are family here on Cosmo but I think we all need Audience in Our life we try to get people to like our poems outside of Cosmo that’s what I’m trying to get to here if you’re not reaching out to other people in your life other than Cosmo then you know reaching out to more audience That you need that satisfaction in your poem Short stories books I know I am like that

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Being Me

You are so right! We all write our poetry because we do it for ourselves but to know that it is appreciated by others does give you a buzz and encourages you to write more. Cosmo is a great place to be inspired by the many fabulous poets on here. I love reading what others have written. I am often disillusioned by the work of so called well known and respected poets but here on Cosmo I have read some real diamonds...poetry that sparkles. I love to comment on work that I find wonderful. Your poem here has been written with such sincerity that it begs to be taken to heart x

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Tina you do it wherever I go I always say did you see my poem  in the paper Or somebody will say to me hey I saw your poem today and I say thank you so the audience in your life is very important and yes first you must like your poem sometimes I do

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