Poem -
The birth of a poem
From a word that someone said
Came a tale walking along a trail
That starts the birth of a poem
I nursed it I rehearsed it
High on a hill I got my fill
Of the sun
Out at sea is whale caught
In gale oh what a tale.
That would be thatβs the start
Of the birth of a poem
Then I nursed it and rehearsed it
While I sat by the sea
Β The birth of a poem
Starts with a word
They say it every day
Then they write it, and
They nursed it and rehearsed it
And then it becomes a Poem
And that is the start of the
Birth of a poem.Β
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Comments
great concept and cool poem Greg!.............................................................Jim
Thank you, Jim
Such an original approach to this fine craft we both love and so much .. the subtle repetition is key to its resounding success .. Bravo GregΒ
thank you Neville
You are so very welcome Greg ..Β
Wow and you birthed and nursed a fantastic poem, so enjoyable to read it delights poetic hearts. Kudos!!!
plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
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Thank you S.zaynab
Excellent rhythm :)
Excellent and cool thinking behind this Greg and a pleasure to know that and how you presented your thought process into fantastic words.
And the beat and flow with a repeat here and there, is inspired writing.
Good to see and great to read :)
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