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THE BOY ON THE TRAIN (Part 2)

THE BOY ON THE TRAIN (Part 2)

As the train pulls out of south staition Maria watchs the train leave intill it is out of view,Maria wounders if she should have went with Billy but then agin John would have found tham and that would have been worse, as Maria leaves  south staition to go back to the north end she takes the subway back she has a 1 pm appointment with the lawyer as she gets out of the subway its almost 1030 she decides to go to church and do some praying as she sits down at church she is the only one in there as she sit in the quit and say prayer my lord please watch over me and my son Billy that we will be safe a nun comes in and sits with and holds her hand and prayers with then the priest comes to her and she say oh father if any thing should happen to me will you take care of me nothing will happen to you my child,as Maria leaves church she goes to the lawyers offices but is spotted by one of Johns friends and he goes and tells John,So John goes home to see what is going on when he get there every thing looks the same so he is going to wait there intill Maria comes home, mean while Billy is safe on the train and about to meet Ted Williams,AS Maria is done at the Lawyers she heads home,AS Maria gets home she see John is home John say some one said thay saw you at a lawyers offices what were you doing there looking in getting a divorce from you then John gets mad!!! and starts yelling and screaming and Maria does the same then John hits Maria very hard and she falls on the floor and hits her head John seeing this gets scared and panic and runs out the house neighbors hearing the argument and see john leave go see how Maria is thay call the police thay find Maria dead the neighbors told tham who did it and police put out all points bulletin on John short time later thay find him in a old empty warehouse john wont give up and start to shoot tham and the police shoot back killing John, The nun and the priest hear about what happen to Maria thay go get Maria body and take it with tham,Mean while back on the train Billy is safe and having fun and on his way to CA and to a new life, AND THIS IS THE END OF PART 2

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sparrowsong

Hello Greg...

WOW!

Great story!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs....

sparrowsong

 

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sparrowsong

Hello Greg...

Yes, I did...

When it comes to subjects of Domestic Violence and Murder and children are involved it's very sad and very real...

I'm just going to stop there...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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Greg Etsell

Part 2 was hard write bec I liked Maria very much 

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Greg Etsell

Cherie thank you but John is dead to the police killed him in the warehouse you have to read that again

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Shaun Cronick

Greg, well I didn't see that coming with Maria and John dead as Billy ventures on .
A gripping story so far and again top marks.
Part 3 awaits...

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