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THE BROKENNESS OF A HEART

THE BROKENNESS OF A HEART

I tore at my soul

I poured out my heart

I fell on my knees

And then, fell apart

I begged and I pleaded

I prayed and I cried

God, please spare his life

As I stood by his side

God said; I heard your plea

I felt your soul tear apart

Though you can't understand, My child

Please trust My heart

Just because you can't see him

It doesn't mean he's not there

He lives on in your heart

He's everywhere

One day, you'll be reunited

As though you were never apart

You won't remember sorrow

Or the brokenness of a heart

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Gayle  A beautifully written piece
Grief after losing a loved one is hard to bare 
Your poem gives a sense of hope that our loved 
ones are always with us  
Lovely!
Welcome to Cosmo look forward to reading you more 
Best wishes Debs 
 

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sparrowsong

Hello Gayle...

Welcome to Cosmo! 

Words of hope, loss, and encouragement...

Beautiful write! 

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Tony Taylor

Hey GAYLE!!....... the strength found in expressing one's feelings so open and honestly this way is tone mark of creative soul ins period of grief.......kt is SO compelling to read of the loss of a loved one......a bit like taking a look inside someone's personal journal......VERY moving piece....... delivered with a great sense of rhythm and timing poetically.........ALL STARS!!....... beautifully done........ and....... WELCOME to COSMO sweet poetess!!.........LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo. ?✳✴☀

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Gayle McMillan

Thank you so much for your encouragement and I enjoyed reading your imput!

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Giselle Jones

Beautiful ! Both sad yet comforting words  for anyone who has experienced loss . 

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Leah Yodico

Beautifully written!!  Welcome to Cosmo 

Xoxo Leah 

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