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THE CABIN IN THE WOODS

THE CABIN IN THE WOODS

Flickering candles omit a muted glow
music plays in the background on a radio
A roaring log fire, warms and invites
as outside snow falls, and a north wind bites
 
This cabin in the woods sets a romantic scene
A vision of contentment a heavenly dream
To be near to nature, the sights and the sounds
Feelings of peacefulness and serenity surrounds

I hear the hoot of an owl, the cry of a fox at night
birds singing their chorus, in mornings first light
A brook usually trickles by,but now frozen with cold
as winter has arrived in this woodland abode

The trees are covered with snow, hill tops too
a sublime picture of beauty from my eye view
This cabin in the wood is where i`d want to stay
away from" the madding crowd," i`ll get there one day   

 

 

 

 
 
 

 
 

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Richard Waters

Such a charming write ! Wonderful descriptive nature to this emphasising and formulating the best aspects of a scene. Great poetry for the season.

Nice piece.

Best wishes to you.  :)

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Deborah Evans

Hi Richard Thank you for 
stopping by my page and Thank you for your kind 
comments 
Best wishes Debs 

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Rose Sho

Such powerful description Debs...made me feel as if I've been to the cabin before...you got a perfect picture for the write...Nicely phrased and rhymed

Lots of love

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Rose I could really imagine myself 
staying in a log cabin like the one in 
the picture. On my list of things to do lol 
Thank you for your kind words always appreciated 
Lots of love Debs 

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Mizzy ......

Sounds idyllic Deborah.... Beautifully written with superb imagery !

Regards Mick.

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Mizzy Thank you for your 
kind words, I appreciate them
Best wishes Debs  

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Larry Ran

Yes, Dear Debs,

"Far from the madding crowd", this sanctuary in the woods is eternal.  For millenniums have existed these places, to retreat to in the freezing winter days, but to never worry, for the fire logs will rekindle their fires of passion. 

Hugs, Peace and Love,

Larry xxx

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Larry  I love to read your comments 
always a pleasure 
Thank you 
Love n hugs Debs xox

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