The Comfort in Dark Places

Break the will of a man
Let him dissipate and rise
Upward in the path of smoke and flame
He prays for release and resolve
Whichever one comes first
He craved the feel of this weight within his All
To be forced to the earth
Unable to bear such a lightness
As begs him higher above the blanket of night sky
Beyond the warmth of all your fires
He is all that is here and far
He is all that lives in the
Desperate heat of your embrace
He will live, always, in the contours
Of your hands at humble work
Your breath upon scorching tear
Upon searing pang of loss
He is the eidolon
And he will give the lie to the form he held
The one now held so dear
You hold open your hands
Catch your own weeping as if to scorn the earth beneath you
Of your ability to feel and
Shatter.
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eidolon GREAT WORD....Awesome write
Hi Jaime, incredible write. I enjoyed the imagery and the the well worded flow throughout. It came off to me as God creating man setting him fourth to be all he was intended to be even though man knows no better or something like that lol. Well done.
Thank you, Mark and Devon. The support really means a lot to me.
Hi Jaime,
What a powerful write. I'm lost in its content, overwhelmed by its cornucopia of creativity. You even taught me a new word, "eidolon", the phantom we all face in life. Great write.
Peace and Love,
xox Larry
Thank you so much for the positive feedback, Larry, and for the kind words. I am humbled by your comment, and the supportive vibes really mean a lot to me. Stay rad, all of you! :)