Poem -
The day my eyes met the world
The day, my eyes, met the world
when my eyes raised open, I was
Amazed at what I saw I grazed
At the world I was amazed
At the faces and places
I went to
The day my eyes met the world
I was amazed, when the sun raised
in my eyes, and how it made me
Feel and how real the world is
When the days, my eyes, Met
The world
The day my eyes met the world
and I saw your face for the first time
It gave me a smile on my face as I giggled and we snuggled together
The day my eyes met the world
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Greg I think this is best work you have done BRAVO! Continue with this in your style.
Thank you Greg that means a lot to me
Oh greg I loved reading this. The instant we notice the grandeur of life. A beautiful poem x
Thank you Gwendoline
Aye, I agree with akk comments, my life truly started some 36 years ago when I met my (future) wife for the first time, I had seen her about and wondered about her and then it appeared she did English lit too... Love this!
Thank you john
this poem is about being born, and opening your eyes for the first time and seeing the world for the first time thanks for reading.
Hi, Greg, yes, I had gathered that, but I feel truly born when I met my wife at 26 before that, my life was not one I would have chosen (to put it mildly) ✌️😇 I love the poem very much, but I got into the world without my twin brother who did not make it, for one, I have never felt as complete as I should have, agsin, meeting my wife made up hugely for that gap🌃 Again, hanx fir the piece
Wowzer .. what a wake up call that most surely was .. Tis what we Brits call an eye opener Greg ..
Neville :)
Beautiful sentiments Greg.
Well written!
JP
Thank you, John