Poem -
The Dream Catcher
Circling my bed I can see this figure hidden in the darkness
through the bed frame
as if it was all the same
All, except the eyes
key lime lined with black treads
glowing in its natural element
Darkness, it lingers
rising and dipping as if doing the Chinese dragon dance
anxiously awaiting me to fall into slumber
to snatch up all my dreams
the dream catcher
Sarah Harry
Comments
Excellent Sarah, very vivid description,
love it.
:) thank you it's my first post in a while so i appreciate your feedback
I liked this piece. Well done and very imaginative.
:) aww thank you
That image is stellar. Beautiful refrain, I love the dark intent
:) thank you i'm thinking of writing a part 2 on it
Awesomeness
the adroitness of your words is mind bending and power of your metaphors truly gives this piece a remarkable twist !
Clever and enticingly haunting !