The First Time I Saw the Rocky Mountains

Once, I was standing at the foot of the mountain
watching its shadowy protrusions stretching
speaking to my senses like brand new languages
holding light and colors in its' shadowy crevices,
and the sky was so radiant and blue
that it seem to wake my spirit to feel brand new
And I was not a love struck novice with virgin eyes;
though this place seemed so impossible; I tell no lies
For I had seen the sun set in golden hues before me
beheld the rage and beauty of the blue Sargasso sea
still, I felt a certain awe inspiring presence there;
no other place had ever made me feel like that before
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Hi, loved this all new experiences are met with virgin eyes loved the phrasings you used created great imagery
cheers jeff
thank you kindly, Jeff, I really appreciate when I get a comment for a write not attached to a tickling topic like love, death or the news of the day, personally I enjoy this write, it speaks of 'nothing' just a man being overwhelmed in the presence of a thing beyond description, again thank you for the words of appreciation, cheers
Stellar write Christopher. I enjoyed the nature of it. very inspiring!
thanks PoetessDarkly, it's one of my favorite writes I've posted on this here site, yes, the place is inspiring, you should go, all good poets should go to the Rockies and be inspired....cheers
thank you, the rocky mountains are spectacular