The Freaks Come Out At Night
After the after-party she walked the dimly lit street
Making her way past prostitutes in doorways
And freaks on the fringe,
The light rain making the hot streets steam
With a rising odor of semen and wet hair
Intoxicated she wobbled, splashing in puddles
As she turned for the shortcut through the dark alleyway
Past dumpsters and bums clutching their bottles
When a hand, from behind, grabbed her hair
And with great force, smashed her face everywhere
Into the wall, the dumpster, the sewer grate
Then, as she lay bleeding, he pissed on her face
Her last thought was that it was a very warm rain,
She was found the next day
With all evidence washed away
And an envelope in her pocket
That read,
"Have a nice day!"....
Tony Taylor
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Hey, Tony.
I see you've been to WalMart late at night yourself. There are definitely some, how do I say this politely...interesting characters there at that time, heh-heh.
I only jest.
Uh oh. Are we to assume we have a modern-day Jack the Pisser roaming our streets?
Ya' know, there are some who enjoy "water sports."
No, I'm not one of them—I think it's a disgusting fetish.
Of course, I think they'd rather forgo the smashed face and bloodied, bruised body portion of this man's routine.
Very dark poem indeed...
~Dean Kuch ♠♠♠?♠♠♠
Thanx DEAN!!.....I agree with you man.... It's a disgusting fetish..... and one that I truly cannot figure out!!.....I just don't see the attraction to a 'golden shower'!!.... yuck !!.....anyway, I'm glad you liked it..... dark writes are your stomping ground..... so it means a LOT to me!!!......thanx again for this!!...... stay groovy!!......T xo ???✴✴❤❤✴✴?
i dont even know where to start, this is a very dark poem, i love the description i could truly picture it all as if i was there watching it happen, and the image you put in just completes the poem, from the title to the very last line.. " have a nice day" it was a trip. such a magnificent read <3 -jaelyn b
Cool!!.. I'm so glad you liked it JAELYN!!....I know it's way out there in the dark part of the ether..... but every now and then I enjoy writing about the Macabre and violent aspects of this crazy reality we live in!!......thanx again for this!!...... Love to you and yours!!....... smiles.....,,T xo ??✴✴?✴✴
Hi Tony, one of the reasons why I don't party at night.... alone... LOL.
This is scary except the ending "have a nice day" ..
xoxo
Leah
LOL!!... you're funny LEAH!!..... Cherie feels the same way you do!!......thanx so much for this girlfriend!!....... always a pleasure to hear from you!!...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo ??✴✴❤❤✴✴?
You're welcome.. Have a good night Tony!!
xoxo
Leah
you too LEAH!!.... xo ?
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
A "lady of the night" no more
For something evil was in her store
A horrid freak was lurking near
She passed by him without a fear
.
But suddenly he grabbed her hair
Beat her senseless, then his penis bared
He pissed on her, like a piece of crap
Then left an envelope, with his final slap
Love you Bro,
Larry xxx
Yet has DNA all washed away? I would like to investigate this one. Very provocative ! I enjoyed this.
Greg
JESUS WEPT!! ????? Tony my poet friend has gone wild!! This is somewhat an awesome write! I absolutely love the title! Very creative albeit a dark subject but now and again there's nothing wrong with that, what a very vivid image you painted here my friend!! ????☮? brother damn the warm rain! ?????